Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle. What are your view?

#scientists #news #media #evidence #climate #change #governments #responsibility #individuals #lifestyle

It has been argued that physical reading materials will extinct

from

Change preposition

show examples

future

Correct article usage

the future

show examples

whereas

Correct word choice

and

show examples

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

will be

reblaiced

Correct your spelling

replaced

by online

website

Fix the agreement mistake

websites

show examples

,which

provied

Correct your spelling

provide

news

for free.In my opinion, I mostly agree with

this

notion because of two reasons

one

of them is that it is more practical to use

Correct article usage

the enternet

show examples

enternet

Correct your spelling

Internet

. where it has ,

Remove the article

apply

show examples

fast access to every

news

agency .in

this

essay

Change the capitalization

show examples

will elaborate more with some examples.

to begin

one

of the reasons to agree with

this

idea is that

Correct article usage

the enternet

show examples

enternet

Correct your spelling

internet

has

fast

Correct article usage

a fast

show examples

ability to provide

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

information

while

the

conventiounal

Correct your spelling

conventional

news paper

Correct your spelling

newspaper

show examples

require

Change the verb form

requires

show examples

some time to be

prented

Correct your spelling

printed

presented

and

destributed

Correct your spelling

distributed

for example

, if

Correct article usage

an earthquick

show examples

earthquick

Correct your spelling

earthquake

earth quick

happenned

Correct your spelling

happened

in a part of a country, the people living in other parts will not know.

untile

Correct your spelling

until

show examples

, the second day comes after

news paper

Correct your spelling

newspaper

show examples

had been sold.

furthermore

,using online websites is not just faster ,but

also

cheaper and

some time

Replace the word

sometimes

show examples

it is free.

however

, online may

has

Change the verb form

have

show examples

some

disadvatages

Correct your spelling

disadvantages

where some

sorces

Correct your spelling

sources

of information may not be

aqurate

Correct your spelling

accurate

in the matter of providing information .

on the other hand

news papers

Correct your spelling

newspapers

show examples

are almost right ,and they do not ly.

additionaly

Correct your spelling

additionally

, the feeling of holding a

news paper

Correct your spelling

newspaper

show examples

with a cup of tea can not be replaced by a cell phone .

to conclude

, even though online

news

agency has some disadvantages , it is

defenatelly

Correct your spelling

definitely

overcomes

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

printed

news papers

Correct your spelling

newspapers

show examples

. so

Change the capitalization

show examples

Correct your spelling

mainly

mainally

Correct your spelling

mainly

manually

agree with the notion that

disuss

Correct your spelling

discuss

the extinct of

prined

Correct your spelling

printed

one

by online

one

for the

tow

Correct your spelling

two

show examples

main reasons that

Change the capitalization

show examples

adreessed

Correct your spelling

addressed

Submitted by mohmmadloaa95 on Sun Feb 12 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
44Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

250 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

9
band
Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
All foundation school subjects should be focused on by the youths while believe students should concentrate on the topic they are specialised in and attracted to. Consequently, these issues have been argued extensively. In this, essay I will argue whether I believe which has the most potential for the youth.
4
band
You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter remind your employer what the course was about explain why the course was useful to you in your work suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues
I am writing to express how I am glad by completed a training course on Bioinformatic .which, was cooperation between our organisation and African city of technology.
5.5
band
CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?
From the very beginning, when we talk about our childhood we all know to listen to our parents but sometimes in our ,,life there is a situation when we need to make our own decisions. Children should always follow their parent's advice , this is in our culture which we talk about at the very start.
5
band
16.When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A new city plan considers that it is a way principal improving parks and sports areas than malls for people's leisure. I totally agree with this idea, because it is really healthy to spend time doing outdoor activities, and also unnecessary shopping is prevented by not going to shopping centres so frequently due to lack of them.
4.5
band
*In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is lack of a sense of community.* *What are the causes of this problem?* *How can it be solved?*
These days, the number of people who do not know their neighbours has been increasing and the sense of community is lost. The main reasons are the excessive use of social media and busy competitive life people are facing, but there are ways to solve problems. In this essay, I will discuss those problems.

Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle. What are your view?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

16.When a new town is planned, it is more important to develop public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

*In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is lack of a sense of community.* *What are the causes of this problem?* *How can it be solved?*

In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?