Many countries are currently witnessing an increase in criminal activities among young people. Discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to deal with the problem.

These days, juvenile crimes are rising in various nations. There are many causes behind
this
. In
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crime
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unemployment will be examined and I will recommend the solutions. Looking first at the major reason, teenagers tend to imitate their idols whether good or bad
actions
.
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present, there are violent scenes on
medias
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such
as
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internet websites and television programs,
moreover
, they are easy to access and most of them are free.
For example
, teenagers
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cars in the public. When they are caught by police officers, youths confessed to their
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and told that they watched how to steal cars on
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online videos and tried to copy those
actions
. If they
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, they will be accepted by their gangsters. To tackle
this
, parents should look after their young members and give
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good instructions when their kids watch violent movies and protect them from involving unlawful occupation. Moving on to another cause, unemployment status leads to increase crime
actions
because unlawful jobs are the one of easy ways to gain money.
For instance
, nearly half of
adolescent
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population in slums choose to be shoplifters and pickpockets because there are
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light penalties and thefts get goods and money instantly.
However
,
this
problem can be handled by governments. They should provide suitable jobs to young people when they have work to do,
then
, they will try to avoid criminal activities to keep their status and criminal record.
To sum up
, even though the obvious reasons are revealed, if guardians and government agencies do not take real
actions
to solve these, juvenile crimes are still continually growing.
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