Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Dicuss both views and give your opinion ?
Now a days
, people having varieties of Correct the word
Nowadays
opinion
like in order to get a good carrier in future either should go to work Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
on
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in
early
stage of life or Add an article
the early
an early
having
a Wrong verb form
have
masters
in Change noun form
master's
subjects
. Presently, more than 80% of Fix the agreement mistake
subject
Correct article usage
the world
world
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world's
population
parents supporting their children to have a Change noun form
population's
degree
in reputed colleges
. Here, in upcoming paragraphs explained how much education
plays a role in carrier growth.
In todays
life, every Change to a genitive case
today's
children
creates a target Change to a singular noun
child
while
studying in school. During childhood
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,childhood
itself
will find a path Correct pronoun usage
one
for
successful growth. So, parents were taking action to Change preposition
to
be
graduate Unnecessary verb
apply
in
top Change preposition
from
colleges
. Because,
most Remove the comma
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
private
companies seeking Add an article
the private
Add an article
an employee
employee
who have Fix the agreement mistake
employees
atleats
minimum graduation Correct your spelling
at least
at leats
in
particular
field. Add an article
a particular
the particular
For example
, in construction
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the construction
field
the supervisor will take Add a comma
,field
individual
who gave Add an article
an individual
the individual
degree
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a degree
on
civil engineering. Change preposition
in
According to
level
of Add an article
the level
a level
education
, company
will pay the salary. In Add an article
the company
public
sector, if we want to write Add an article
the public
exam
Correct article usage
an exam
atleast
required any Correct your spelling
at least
degree
to apply for examination
. Add an article
the examination
an examination
Hence
, education
which
plays Correct pronoun usage
apply
important
role to get Add an article
an important
dream
job.
Add an article
a dream
the dream
In
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Case
case
of Correct article usage
the case
person
who works at Add an article
a person
the person
early
stage without any college Add an article
an early
degree
will be knowing more about the job. While
comparing
to educated people they might know more about Wrong verb form
compared
work life
Add a hyphen
work-life
how
to handle circumstances but when it comes to Correct word choice
and how
high paying
companies Add a hyphen
high-paying
along with
experience education
will matters
more. Change the verb form
matter
Hence
to certain extent growth might be stabilised as straight
line. Currently, students Add an article
a straight
choosing
authorised Wrong verb form
choose
colleges
or moving
abroadWrong verb form
move
for
study Change preposition
to
inorder
to get high payment Correct your spelling
in order
in
MNC companies. Change preposition
from
Hence
, it is important to study in colleges
to make a bright future.
In conclusion, I would like to provide my opinion as to have Fix the agreement mistake
college
a successful carrier children
should choose Correct the article-noun agreement
successful carrier children
a successful carrier child
colleges
not only for getting degree
certificates but also
fo
build up a behavioural attitude and good communication Correct your spelling
to
skill
across Fix the agreement mistake
skills
the
people.Correct article usage
apply
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