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7. In some countries, parents expect children to spend long time studying both in and after school, and have less free time. Do you think it has the positive or negative effects on children and society?

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Parents
 expect their toddlers to spend
time
 in their studies as it would be beneficial for their future afterwards.
However
, it has a negative effect on
children
. We will be discussing
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 in the paragraph below.
To begin
 with, it is the responsibility of the
parents
 to spend
time
 with their
children
as well as
 to upbring ing of their career. So
this
 led to a debate about whether the
children
 need to have freedom or expect their
children
 to their
time
 on their studies.
Moreover
, studying more has
also
 resulted in exhaustion as they study after school hours. In
this
 situation, the
children
 have the option to choose whether to choose to study or skip that by doing some other activity.
This
 has negatively impacted some students as become more irritated towards listening to their
parents
 and had caused the
children
 to furious towards more
parents
. In the
,
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schools the school management expects their students to be part of the extra classes and do the homework whichever they have asked to do. By
this
, the students have very less
time
 throughout the day which had
also
 impacted their health sometimes. All and all it is
parents
' responsibility to give free
time
 to their
children
 by asking them either to play outside or spend their free as they wish.
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