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Some people think that children should start school at early very early age, but others believe that children should go to school until they are older.Disscuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #children #school #age #disscuss
Learning children and educating them is the
corner stone
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 of individual future and community development. Some people believe that children should start learning as early as possible
while
 other people oppose
this
 idea and have the opinion that they should start learning after 7 years. In
this
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 we will discuss both views and give our
believes
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. To
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begin
 with the superiority of
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early education, perhaps parents think that school provides a situation for their kids to grow mentally faster and enables them to reach university and higher education earlier. These young
persons
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 will definitely have better job opportunities and more chances for popular
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 in adulthood. They are
also
 self-confident teenagers because they are ahead of
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 peers.
On the contrary
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 my feeling that young babies should play at an early age and have their own ages related hobbies rather than learning.
This
 helps them discover their talents and found what they are interested in. It should be possible that if young people commence learning too early, they may lose their enthusiasm for learning at older ages and
for
this
 reason they
dropout
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 of school when education is the most important stage in their
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.All in all, it is better to spend their childhood days with happiness and freely with their friends.
As a
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 I completely agree with
this
 point of view.
To conclude
,
although
 starting to learn in the early years of life can be beneficial, it is not worth the examination considering the problem that may arise.
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