Today people are living in a throwaway society where they use things for a short time only and then throw them away. What are the causes of this and what problems can it lead to?

We cannot deny that the rise of consumerism is closely related to
throwaway
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lifestyle, since people can afford goods
in
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at
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a lower price because of mass production. In
this
essay, we will discuss in the first paragraph
about
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the causes of
obsolescent
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an obsolescent
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lifestyle which are the
lack
of awareness about
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whether in communities or industry,
then
in the second
paragraph
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we will discuss the impact of unregulated disposal
to
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the environment eventually. Irresponsible disposal by
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the
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society
is often involved
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in the
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the
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lack
of recycling awareness as
consequences
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the communities will not understand some information
such
as the danger of plastic disposal to the sea ecosystem and
separation
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the separation
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of garbage categories in the trash bin to ease the dumping process.
Additionally
, because
lack
of attention to
this
phenomenon from the public, eventually
giving
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gives
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no urgency to the industries to produce more environmentally friendly products. A good case in point is that in Germany,
the
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society will not use the product of industries that violate the
recycle
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regulation,
this
can be happened because of high environmental awareness. There are many issues caused by irresponsible disposal, whether in the short or in the long term. In
the
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short period, it will create an uncomfortable environment and affect our
convenient
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.
For instance
, a local market that has organic trash
such
as rotten fish and vegetables will produce
bad
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a bad
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smell
to
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the surroundings.
Additionally
, in the long term,
this
issue will impact ecosystem stability.
For example
, a number of turtles that its neck stuck
within
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in
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plastics bottle as
result
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the species cannot reproduce because
it
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deceased
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decreased
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.
To sum up
, the major problems of unregulated thrown away are the
lack
of understanding and less pressure towards the industries,
as a
result
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there is no simple act for recycling and environmentally friendly products. In
short
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a short
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period, it simply affects our
convenient
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and eventually will interfere
ecosystem
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with ecosystem
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stability. I strongly recommend that the government must regulate and executes environmental campaigns about
recycle
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recycling
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in the near future.
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