The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
This
chart illustrates the money spend on
consumer
goods in
France
and
UK
two counties in the year 2010,
consumer
goods named cars,
computers
,books and perfume. cars are the item of all others where the highest amount of money has been spent.In the
UK
the people have spent precisely four hundred
thousand
on another hand, in
France
the amount is around four hundred
thousand
. for
computers
,
France
has spent more on
computers
than the
UK
the difference between both countries is thirty
thousand
.if
France
could have spent twenty
thousand
more on
France
computers
have been the where more money is spent. Expenditure on books is second highest in the United Kingdom after cars in given
consumer
goods
in addition
France
has spent less amount on books in the whole year. perfume is the
consumer
good where which has the least number in expenditure in both nations,
France
has a higher expenditure of approximately two hundred
thousand
throughout the year 2010 which is significantly more than the
UK
whose count is one hundred thirty
thousand
.
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