The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
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This
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chart illustrates the money spend on
consumer
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goods in
France
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and
UK
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two counties in the year 2010,
consumer
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goods named cars,
computers
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,books and perfume. cars are the item of all others where the highest amount of money has been spent.In the
UK
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the people have spent precisely four hundred
thousand
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on another hand, in
France
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the amount is around four hundred
thousand
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. for
computers
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,
France
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has spent more on
computers
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than the
UK
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the difference between both countries is thirty
thousand
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.if
France
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could have spent twenty
thousand
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more on
France
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computers
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have been the where more money is spent. Expenditure on books is second highest in the United Kingdom after cars in given
consumer
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goods
in addition
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France
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has spent less amount on books in the whole year. perfume is the
consumer
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good where which has the least number in expenditure in both nations,
France
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has a higher expenditure of approximately two hundred
thousand
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throughout the year 2010 which is significantly more than the
UK
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whose count is one hundred thirty
thousand
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumer, france, uk, computers, thousand with synonyms.
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