‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction? Explanation of the Task

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The
internet
will not be replaced the traditional courses of
books
, because reading from
books
is very much easier than, scrolling up and down on the
internet
. For ,
i
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partially agree and will be discussing more it in the passage below.
To begin
with, the
internet
played a vital role in
this
developing nation as it has enabled us to get any
information
with just a click away to get any
information
.
whereas
, to get the details, of
course
,
course
any
books
information
, it is not available on the
internet
.
Moreover
, For some subjects like Mathematics, and science we can get more detailed
information
& various types of videos on the
internet
. But when it comes to subjects like Hindi, Sanskrit, Social studies and geography we have to rely on
course
textbooks
books
, and Guides.
Furthermore
, the get any help related to subjects like Hindi and Sanskrit, is not feasible to get on the
internet
. As it is related to the language parts, students definitely need a teacher to explain everything in detail so that it would be easier for the students to understand as on the
internet
there is very less chance to get some info related to
this
. when it comes to traditional textbooks
books
, it is very carefully written and designed by different teachers as per level
course
and curriculum and is never shared on the
internet
.
Likewise
, Examination papers designed by different teachers cannot be availed on the
internet
, as it can lead to the issue of malpractice. All and all it is not possible that everything would available on the
internet
as we have to rely on text and teachers for education.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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