The pie charts below show the data regarding the time people spend on smartphones and tablets, divided by category.
The given pie charts demonstrate the proportion of time people their
smartphones
and tablets
for six different aspects, namely: games, news, music and videos, social networking and other.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that games are the most used category on both smartphones
and tablets
.
Looking at the figures in detail, games have the highest percentage of usage with 35% on smartphones
and 57% on tablets
. Also
, people spent 29% on smartphones
and 15% on tablets
using social networks, which comes in the second proportion of the most used category.
Furthermore
, utilities are the third most used aspect on smartphones
by 20%. In contrast
, people who use tablets
spent only 30% of their time using them. In regards to news, users almost equally do not check it a lot with 3-4% on smartphones
and tablets
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