University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages.

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The ever-increasing trend of university

students

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going

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abroad for the purpose of

education

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raise some debates. From

connoisseur's

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point of view,

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trend has both merits and demerits.

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, from my standpoint, the drawbacks never outweigh the benefits.

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with,

education

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is a basic human right and there should be no border between

students

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and

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education

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. Without achieving

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education

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an education

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no one can succeed and survive in

hisr

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his

this

life. Unfortunately, some countries,

specially

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the underdeveloped and developing ones cannot be able to provide quality higher

education

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the

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apply

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students

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students

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intend to leave their countries to achieve higher

education

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and after achieving degrees from abroad they come back with better skills and

trainnings

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trainings

training

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education

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can help them to flourish in their professional lives and prove their efficiencies in several fields

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for

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example,

engeneering

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engineering

, medicine, nursing,

business

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and business

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. A recent study based

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India demonstrates that

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there

are

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a huge difference between the performances of employers who achieve

education

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form

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from

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abroad and those from

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home

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their home

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country

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, some people are against getting higher

education

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abroad for

students

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. The reason is a significant number of

students

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are

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interested in coming back to their

home

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country

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some

students

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are much interested in higher

education

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they do not feel the responsibilities towards their

country

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and people. That's why the

home

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country

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ultimately

suffer

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because of worker and employer crises and so on.

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this

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disadvantages do not outweigh the advantages

becasue

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because

migration

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the migration

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of people from one

country

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to another reduces the population of the

home

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country

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, the workers who were past

students

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earn and send

remmitance

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remittance

remittances

to the

home

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country

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to build up their economy. Going abroad for higher

education

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has definitely some demerits

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however

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, it has some strong merits which does not outweigh the demerits. Rather

students

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who go abroad for

education

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can help to build up both host countries and

homeland

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their homeland

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

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more and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign country. do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?