Write a letter to your boss apologizing for the delay in submitting your report at work last week

Dear Sir, I am writing to apologize for

delay

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in submitting my report

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last

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week. I sincerely apologize and regret that I could not provide my report. I felt really embarrassed and ashamed when I found out that I disappointed you. The day before, when I had to provide

a documents

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, I was badly poisoned and I was in

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. I felt sick,

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, I forgot about

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this

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important documents.

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I left my phone at home,

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, I could not inform you about

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accident. I promise, that after three days I submitting my report.

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Moreover

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compensation

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I will work without

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weekend

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the

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next two weeks. Please accept my

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once again.

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sincerely, John Miller

ina1_95Mon Feb 13 2023

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

120 words

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Write a letter to your boss apologizing for the delay in submitting your report at work last week

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them at school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?