A neighbour has caused damage to your car. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter - Describe the damage - How the damage influences your life - Suggest what actions he/she should take about it
Dear Mr Smiths,
I'm writing to let you know about the damage I have noticed on my
car
that I believe you are responsible for.
Use synonyms
Last
Tuesday, I found a big scratch on my Linking Words
car
door, which left a question about what might have caused it. Use synonyms
Then
yesterday evening, my brother came to visit and told me that he saw you Linking Words
parking
your Change the form of the verb
park
car
very close to mine and left a scratch on the door. The scratch is very deep and large, making me feel very sad every time I see itUse synonyms
,
since I just bought the Remove the comma
apply
car
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last
month.
We all know that our parking areas are limited within the community, so there is a high probability that we may Linking Words
have
face an accident Unnecessary verb
apply
such
as Linking Words
this
one as we park our cars quite close together. And I am sure that was just an accident and you did not do Linking Words
this
on purpose. So, I would suggest that you could call your Linking Words
car
insurance company to cover the cost of the Use synonyms
repairing
and practise your parking skill when you feel available, and if possible please pay more attention Replace the word
repair
while
parking.
Hope you could consider my suggestions and live a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Sarah LeeLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite