Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
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students
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that they will Correct article usage
the advantages
achieved
. It will be discussed in the following essay.
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achieve
students
by joining Use synonyms
students
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on
social service movements Change preposition
in
due to
improve their Linking Words
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and leadership Correct your spelling
empathy
skills
. When Use synonyms
youngster
involve in Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
non-government
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a non-government
the non-government
organization
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organizations
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) that focus on charity, they will learn how to help Fix the agreement mistake
NGOs
with
other Change preposition
apply
people
. Use synonyms
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, a group of pupils might arrange a charity project to help homeless Linking Words
people
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Therefore
, they will gain an experience to be Linking Words
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people
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the organization
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students
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basic
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the basic
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students
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especially
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,especially
workplace
. Use synonyms
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, high Linking Words
school
should put social Fix the agreement mistake
schools
activities
in their subjects.
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people
believe that when young Use synonyms
people
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joining
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join
NGO
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time consuming
, Add a hyphen
time-consuming
it
will be better for them to learn certain Correct word choice
and it
skills
that could help them in the Use synonyms
workplace
. Use synonyms
However
, I think by Linking Words
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putting
students
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services
, they will learn Fix the agreement mistake
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an
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apply
skills
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such
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problem solving
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problem-solving
decision making
that will be beneficial in the Add a hyphen
decision-making
workplace
. Use synonyms
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, companies might need those Linking Words
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due to
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problem
that workers will be faced in the office. Since community Use synonyms
activities
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problem solving
and Add a hyphen
problem-solving
decision making
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decision-making
skills
, they can compete in the workforce.
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people
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think
that social Wrong verb form
thinking
activities
might be Use synonyms
time consuming
, I believe social Add a hyphen
time-consuming
activities
will give much more benefits for Use synonyms
students
in the future. They will learn how to Use synonyms
be
gain Unnecessary verb
apply
their
leadership, Correct pronoun usage
apply
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problem solving
, and Add a hyphen
problem-solving
decision making
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decision-making
skills
that will be beneficial for them in the Use synonyms
workplace
.Use synonyms
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