Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
In
this
era, some people
argue that volunteering activity
should be part of Fix the agreement mistake
activities
high
school curriculum. In my Add an article
the high
opinion
I absolutely agree that Add a comma
,opinion
students
must follow some community service activity due to
advantages
that they will Correct article usage
the advantages
achieved
. It will be discussed in the following essay.
First of all, it is true that secondary education has to support Change the verb form
achieve
students
by joining students
on
social service movements Change preposition
in
due to
improve their emphaty
and leadership Correct your spelling
empathy
skills
. When youngster
involve in Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
non-government
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a non-government
the non-government
organization
(Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
NGO
) that focus on charity, they will learn how to help Fix the agreement mistake
NGOs
with
other Change preposition
apply
people
. For instance
, a group of pupils might arrange a charity project to help homeless people
in their place. Therefore
, they will gain an experience to be emphaty
to other Correct your spelling
empathy
people
and help them. Moreover
, live
in Wrong verb form
living
organization
will encourage Add an article
the organization
an organization
student's
Change noun form
students
skill
how to manage Fix the agreement mistake
skills
people
. Managing an organization is one of basic
Add an article
the basic
skills
that students
must have in the future especially
in the Add the comma(s)
,especially
workplace
. Thus
, high school
should put social Fix the agreement mistake
schools
activities
in their subjects.
Nevertheless
, some people
believe that when young people
joining
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join
NGO
will be Fix the agreement mistake
NGOs
time consuming
, Add a hyphen
time-consuming
it
will be better for them to learn certain Correct word choice
and it
skills
that could help them in the workplace
. However
, I think by put
Wrong verb form
putting
students
in community services
, they will learn Fix the agreement mistake
service
an
important Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
skills
such
as problem solving
and Add a hyphen
problem-solving
decision making
that will be beneficial in the Add a hyphen
decision-making
workplace
. For instance
, companies might need those skills
due to
the problem
that workers will be faced in the office. Since community activities
could give pupils learning problem solving
and Add a hyphen
problem-solving
decision making
Add a hyphen
decision-making
skills
, they can compete in the workforce.
In conclusion, despite people
think
that social Wrong verb form
thinking
activities
might be time consuming
, I believe social Add a hyphen
time-consuming
activities
will give much more benefits for students
in the future. They will learn how to be
gain Unnecessary verb
apply
their
leadership, Correct pronoun usage
apply
problem solving
, and Add a hyphen
problem-solving
decision making
Add a hyphen
decision-making
skills
that will be beneficial for them in the workplace
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