More and more qualified peopleare moving from poor to rich countiries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering. computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countires are tealing from poor countires. Other feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Discouss both the views and give your opinion.

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workers

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as engineers, doctors and computer professionals are trying to go from their native

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places

to developed

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countries

such

as Canada,

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,

Japan

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. some

people

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situation but some human

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think is, it is not

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is very serious we cannot be neglected. I opine that

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it is

natural

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movement of

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workers

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people

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that

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outher

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other countries

countires

are giving good

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facility

facilities

and better opportunities camper to own country.

Moreover

, some professionals are migrating not only for the money but

also

better

life style

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such

as free health care

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and free education for their families.

for example

, Canada's foreign doctors immigrated to

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as

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family

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. It is true that

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some human

being

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are going to Canada and accepting their visa

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easily

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In addition

,

people

can understand

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and

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knowledge with each other.

Thus

,

people

met many

people

regularly so they learn many languages.

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, other

people

believe that shifting to rich

countires

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countries

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not good for them.

for instance

, most of the

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comparies

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companies

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Google. It is from

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united

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States so they are never hiring

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countries

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techinicians

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sometime

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they

are

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hiring but they do not give good opportunities and better

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.

hence

, some

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worker

do

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not shift

outher

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other

countires

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countries

.

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,

people

are

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going to

outher

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another

country has both advantages and disadvantages. taking support of

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argument, some

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skill

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workers

are migrating to

other country

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another country

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for

better

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life it is good for them but some

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workers

are not

shifiting

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shifting

to

roch

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rich

countries for better opportunities. I express my opinion in

human

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being

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are shifting to other countries for

better

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a better

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facility

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