Many people use distance learning programs to study at home, but some people think it cannot bring benefit in comparison to attending college and university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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today's
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everyone
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an education
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a learning
college
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raises
confidence
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goes
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students
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they
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today's
be learn
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people
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increase
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the interaction
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people
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knowledge
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a university
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the different
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cultures
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,
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people
go to university
to get education
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an education
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they
person
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people
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about the different traditions and custom
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customs
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future
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the future
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report
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the report
people
who went to college
for their higher studies get more knowledge
about their future
rather than those who satay
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stay
for
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people
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