You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you are selling • describe the furniture • suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

Dear Ahmed, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you

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email to let you know that I am going to sell some furniture. and I thought you may be interested to buy some from it. As you know I am going to move to a new apartment after a long time of searching. and ,

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I will reallocate to the new location next month. the new flat is not much big as the old one.

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why I want to sell some furniture. The furniture includes one round table and four chairs. all are made from wood, and I bought

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from IKEA. and one TV screen

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is made in China and the brand is LG. I am offering all staff for sale and the prices are reasonable. I am available next week during the weekend. you can come to my house and have a look to decide if you want to buy any. If you need more information please call me, Take care, Ehab

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