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Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.

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In recent years, the diversity of
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 gives a lot of people what to choose from and where to
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, there are some people who want to employ by the company ,
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 others would prefer to
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 on their own. From my own point of view and
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 my situation at
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 time, I would like to own a small
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 to be available for my family's needs,
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, working at any institution can give a lot of benefits,
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, it can give the worker
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 stability since the company that hired them is already established,
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 it will guarantee them paid holidays, maternal benefits and costs for long service.
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, some people like me would love owning a trade because it can give flexibility to a job, which is very crucial in being a mother.
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 having a
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 is not an easy job, since you have to take a risk in order to make a profit, it is like taking care of a baby that you need to put all your efforts and sacrifices to make it grow.
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 for me being a mother having a
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-life balance is very essential, and I always put my family first more than anything. If I am owning a
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 I can always manage my time to be with my children whenever they need me,
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, during school activities that parents need to attend,
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 cooking their favourite meals, and helping them with their homework. Anytime I can just sneak out to my
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 to be with them,
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 makes working on my own very adaptable. In conclusion, sometimes it is up to the person's preference and
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 the situation they are facing to make them choose whether they will
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 on their own or tasks for others, as long as they have job satisfaction and
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-life balance.
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