The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart gives information about the changes in owning
the
electrical machines and the proportions of time spent doing chores in families in one nation between 1920 and 2019.It is clear from the graph that the percentage of Correct article usage
apply
number
of hours per week Change the article
the number
was
declined over the years.
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According to
what is shown,in 1920 the ratio of households who Linking Words
were
used refrigerator Unnecessary verb
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was
increased sharply till 1980.Unnecessary verb
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Then
,it remained constant at 100%.Linking Words
Moreover
,the Linking Words
percent
of households with Replace the word
percentage
vacuum
cleaner Add an article
a vacuum
was
rose in 1920 and maintained the same level Unnecessary verb
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with
Change preposition
as
Add an article
a refrigerator
the refrigerator
refrigerator
in 2000.Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
As for
,the rate of households who owned washing machine Change preposition
apply
was fluctuated
till 2019.
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fluctuated
In addition
,the figures Linking Words
of
hours of chores per week started to Change preposition
for
decreased
gradually from 1920 until 1960.The period from 1980 to 2000 saw a stable remain in the number of hours.Change the verb
decrease
Then
,it dropped dramatically.
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To sum up
,we could say that the proportion of families with Linking Words
Add an article
the refrigerator
refrigerator
was the highest percentage compared with the other electrical machines.Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
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