The diagram shows how the rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australia.

The diagram illustrates a particular way to collect rainwater and transform it into drinkable

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and use it in homes in some parts of Australia.

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, it is a linear process, which has three steps, starting with the collection of the

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when it is raining and ending up with the

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available for human safe intake. In the first stage, the

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drains through the ceiling to the tubes under the house. The

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travels inside the tube and passes to a

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filter, where after it has been filtered, the

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travels again inside the tubes and arrives in a storage room under the house.

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, the

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passes to another room where chemicals are added to the

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the

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has to stay for some hours, so the chemicals can clean the

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and make it safer for drinking. After that, the

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goes up through the tubes and it is ready to be consumed by people.