The graph below shows the amounts spent on cloths on the internet in the USA and japan between 1999 and 2003
The line graph compares the clothes expenditure via online shopping in the USA and Japan from 1999 to 2003.
It is clear that
in 1999 Japanese
spend more money Correct article usage
the Japanese
in
buying Change preposition
on
cloths
Correct your spelling
clothes
from
the Internet than the Americans. It is noticeable that the amount of money spent Change preposition
on
flactuates
with an increasing trend.
In 1999, the Japanese spent twice the amount the Japanese paid on their apparel online at 10 Correct your spelling
fluctuates
millions
. In Change to singular
million
year
2000, the figures for both countries increased, 12 and 10 Change the article
the year
million
, respectively. Surprisingly, both countries had dropped their spending on cothing
in Correct your spelling
clothing
year
2001 to only 7 Change the article
the year
million
.
The two following years, 2002 and 2003 showed a rapid increased
in sales of Replace the word
increase
cloths
online. In 2002, the USA residents spent around 19 Correct your spelling
clothes
million
whereas
in Japan they spent 1 million
less. Online apparel sales reach its peaked at
2003, with around 20 Change preposition
in
millions
spent by the two countries.Change to singular
million
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