The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie chart elaborates on the benefits and drawbacks of visiting Bowen
island
depending on the views of the tourists.Here they have taken common areas into account to evaluate their service.
Looking from an overall
perspective it is readily apparent that most of the visitors find the high cost of living as a limiting factor whereas
they are satisfied with the hospitability of the residents.Furthermore
,given details illustrate four main advantages and disadvantages that people have accounted for their stay.
On one hand ,50% of the total visitors have assumed expenses as a major issue,while
a quarter of visitors is
disappointed with entertainment facilities.The weather on the Correct subject-verb agreement
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island
felt drastic by 15% and only 10% found food quality was not up to the stand.
On the other hand
, 42% of travellers enjoyed the hospitality of people and they were happy with the residents' support.32% enjoyed the scenery of Bowen island
.With regard to accommodation ,only 11% 0had positive thoughts and 12% admired the culture on the island
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