You have been offered a scholarship for obtaining a distance Master's degree through distance learning at a prestigious university. One of the requirements is to take a test on site once a month. Write a letter to your current employer.In your letter: • Share the news. • Explain how this will be helpful. • Ask for permission to be absent. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………..,

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Dear Mr Smith, I am very excited to inform you that I have been selected for a scholarship to get a master's degree from a well-named university through their online learning

course

. It is indeed dream come true for me. Today, I got a mail from the university that I am selected for a scholarship. It was difficult for me to manage my time with my job to prepare for

this

scholarship exam . But, I achieved

this

goal only because of you. I am glad you always motivate me to achieve

this

goal. I would like to inform you that

this

course

will increase my skills in software development. I am already a professional

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developer but doing

this

course

give me a boost to tackle problems of software development alone and it would use for the company as they do not need to hire one more person for software development.

However

, To complete

this

course

I have to go to the university once a month to give exams. I would appreciate it if you could give me one day off from work every month to give

this

exam. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Nick Jones

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