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Many people have complained about the large salaries paid to top executives of major companies. Why do you think top executives are so well paid? Do you think their large salaries are justified?

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Many people raise questions about the high
salaries
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 paid to top employees of major companies. Compare to other employees
executives
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 are taking high
salaries
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, the difference between a normal employee and
executives
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 is huge so people are looking for the difference in
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 and not comparing work and responsibility. I believe that top
executives
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 are having experience and good skills to manage the team and deliver the task on time, and they have a big responsibility to run the company profitably. companies are paying high
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 to these
executives
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 to put their efforts and their experience into achieving company goals,
executives
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 are taking high
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 because they have experience and better skills than others. In my ,opinion the company paying
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