Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatment instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
There is no denying the fact that the impact of alternative
treatment
is arguable. Poupulation
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visit
herbs
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practioner
rather than visiting the hospital. In the forthcoming paragraphs, Correct your spelling
practitioners
this
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and disadvantages of going to natural Correct your spelling
advantages
medicine
specialist and it will show my point of views
.
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a population
the population
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who argue that the merit of going to holistic Fix the agreement mistake
populations
medicine
practioner
outweigh it is Correct your spelling
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. The main reason for believing Add an article
a demerit
this
is that many serious diseases have no cure. For instance
, cancer patients
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natural medicine
specialist
where they ask for Fix the agreement mistake
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treatment
despite believing that may be there is no cure. In addition
, in hopless
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patients
prone
to listen to the Add a missing verb
are prone
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public
advices
asking for hope. Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
Consequently
, holistic medicine
might help in the treatement
of Correct your spelling
treatment
hopless
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hopeless
situation
. Indeed, it makes clear that Fix the agreement mistake
situations
such
treatment
may help those patients
with sophisticated syndrom
.
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syndromes
On the other hand
, other
believe that the disadvantage of requesting therapy from natural therapy outweigh it is advantages. Society often Correct pronoun usage
others
have
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has
this
opinion because the basic
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basis
medicine
is not scientific. Although
most of the practioners
have no certificate Correct your spelling
practitioners
in
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from
health
authority, the population still Correct article usage
the health
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continues
continue
continuous
visit
them. As a consequence
, most of the people who asked for the treatment
tend to lose their money without a solution. A particular
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particularly
patients
who visit
alternative medicine
therapist
, did not get any hope. Fix the agreement mistake
therapists
Thus
, it becomes apparent that such
treatments may consume Correct article usage
the population
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money without any help.
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however
, I feel that the negative of attempting to go to alternative medicine
significantly
higher than the positive. Add a missing verb
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This
is because of the fact that such
field
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a field
Furthermore
, a huge number of people said that they lost their money without getting any answers.Submitted by mgumssan on
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