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Mobile phones have changed the way people communicate. Nowadays people cannot live without them if they want to be a part of society. To what extent do you think this is true? Why do you think some people have not adapted to this type of communication?

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In the past few years, telecommunication industries have changed the way
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 communicate. Mobiles became part of daily life,
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 because of their portability and advancement. I agree that it changed the entire game, of how we communicate. Being said that there are some who still feel that communication can happen in other ways too.In the forthcoming ,paragraphs I will be briefing both views. First of all, in
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 fast-going ,lifestyle no one has the time to wait, so they chose mobile
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 for the fast delivery of news. In today's ,society everything is being communicated with cell
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 . For ,example if a person is getting married ,the invitation is sent through WhatsApp or calls,
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 cannot happen if you do not have a mobile.
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 can save a lot of time and energy because in the olden days to send a message they used to travel to that place directly or they used to FAX the message both ways it's not beneficial.
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, some feel there is the existence of humans even before the invention of
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 electronic medium.
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, adoption is not seen in older
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 because they feel it's not good for their health.
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 an individual is using mobile
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 they are directly allowing several radiations into the body. As per the records ,
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 who are keener towards their health tend to avoid the usage of
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 as much as they can. Being said they face many problems
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. In conclusion, there should be a balance in the usage. It's easy to deliver and receive news but it should be addictive.
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