In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this.
There are many problems in developing
countries
such
as declining
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the declining
quality
of air
and water
from industry
and construction
. So, to prevent this
problem
they should build landfill
and Add an article
a landfill
using
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use
eco-friendly
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the eco-friendly
ingredient
.
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ingredients
Industry
and construction
should make landfill
to decrease big problem
like Change the noun form
problems
water
pollution and declining air
quality
in developing countries
, Correct word choice
and minimalize
minimalize
health Wrong verb form
minimalising
problem
. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
This
is because, many construction
and industry
do not have good
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a good
landfill
, they just dispose their
waste in the Change preposition
of their
river
and spread out fog
in the Add an article
the fog
air
without any process as filter
. Add an article
a filter
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, K
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the K
industry
throw
their waste Change the verb form
throws
in
the Change preposition
into
river
that
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which
cause
biota on the Change the verb form
causes
river
died
and people that live Change the verb form
to die
in
the side of Change preposition
on
river
cannot utilise Add an article
the river
for
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it for
drink
and fishing. It can be Wrong verb form
drinking
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a danger
danger
for people, they can be Replace the word
dangerous
contamination
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contaminated
from
waste toxic. If Change preposition
by
industry
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the industry
build
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builds
landfill
it can decrease the number of pollutions
.
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pollution
Declining
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The declining
quality
of air
and water
pollution in many developing countries
are cause
by Correct your spelling
caused
industry
and construction
activities can be solve
by using Change the verb form
be solved
eco-friendly
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the eco-friendly
ingredient
. Putting it more simply, eco-friendly
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the eco-friendly
ingredient
does not create negative
impact Add an article
a negative
for
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on
environment
and Add an article
the environment
it
more Correct pronoun usage
apply
save
rather Change the verb form
saves
that
using Correct your spelling
than
ingredient
that can make problem
for Add an article
a problem
the problem
environment
. Add an article
the environment
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, producing straw
from paper is more eco-friendly than using Fix the agreement mistake
straws
plastic
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a plastic
straw
because when people finish using Fix the agreement mistake
straws
straw
they will throw Fix the agreement mistake
straws
it
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them
in to
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into
rubbish
and Correct article usage
the rubbish
straw
that
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apply
make
from paper will Wrong verb form
made
be dissolve
but Change the verb form
be dissolved
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a straw
straw
from Fix the agreement mistake
straws
plastic
cannot Add an article
the plastic
degradation
. They should burn the plastic Replace the word
degrade
straw
and
it can make Correct word choice
as
air
quality
decrease.
In conclusion, to prevent declining
Add an article
the declining
quality
of air
and water
from industry
and construction
in developing countries
they should build landfill
and Add an article
a landfill
using
Wrong verb form
use
eco-friendly
Add an article
the eco-friendly
ingredient
. If possible, Fix the agreement mistake
ingredients
industry
and construction
should strengthen regulation
that Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
have
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has
impact
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an impact
for
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on
environment
.Add an article
the environment
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