The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income that five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income that five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
The given table shows the percentage of household
income
spent per month by five
countries
in Europe on four items.
Overall
, we can see that all five
countries
spend the majority of their
income
on food and drink and housing,
while
on clothing and entertainment, their spending was the lowest. Turkey’s expenditure on food and drink was the highest at 36%, followed by Spain at 31%,
while
the other three
countries
spend around a quarter on
this
: the UK at 27%,
France
at 25% and Germany at 22%, which was the lowest percentage on
this
item.
On the other hand
, housing is the largest expenditure item for the UK, Germany and
France
, with all of them spending around one-third of their
income
, at respectively 37%, 33% and 31%.
However
, Turkey and Spain’s outlay was only a fifth of their
income
at nearly 20%. All five
countries
spend much less on the remaining two items. For clothing,
France
and Spain recorded the lowest percentage, with less than 10%,
while
the other three
countries
spend around the same amount between 15% and 11%. Germany’s expenditure on entertainment was the highest at 19%, whilst UK and Turkey spend approximately half
this
amount (11% and 10%), with
France
and
Spain’s
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spending between those other three nations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Household income
  • Allocate
  • Basic necessities
  • Expenditures
  • Essentials
  • Economy
  • Living conditions
  • Standard of living
  • Cultural significance
  • Leisure activities
  • Financial prioritization
  • Noticeable trends
  • Unusual allocations
  • Society's values
  • Economic status
  • Illustrates
  • Highlights
  • Comparison
  • Analyze
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