The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income that five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income that five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
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The given table shows the percentage of household
income
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spent per month by five
countries
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in Europe on four items.
Overall
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, we can see that all five
countries
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spend the majority of their
income
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on food and drink and housing,
while
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on clothing and entertainment, their spending was the lowest. Turkey’s expenditure on food and drink was the highest at 36%, followed by Spain at 31%,
while
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the other three
countries
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spend around a quarter on
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: the UK at 27%,
France
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at 25% and Germany at 22%, which was the lowest percentage on
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item.
On the other hand
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, housing is the largest expenditure item for the UK, Germany and
France
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, with all of them spending around one-third of their
income
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, at respectively 37%, 33% and 31%.
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, Turkey and Spain’s outlay was only a fifth of their
income
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at nearly 20%. All five
countries
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spend much less on the remaining two items. For clothing,
France
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and Spain recorded the lowest percentage, with less than 10%,
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the other three
countries
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spend around the same amount between 15% and 11%. Germany’s expenditure on entertainment was the highest at 19%, whilst UK and Turkey spend approximately half
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amount (11% and 10%), with
France
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and
Spain’s
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Spain
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spending between those other three nations.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, countries, france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Household income
  • Allocate
  • Basic necessities
  • Expenditures
  • Essentials
  • Economy
  • Living conditions
  • Standard of living
  • Cultural significance
  • Leisure activities
  • Financial prioritization
  • Noticeable trends
  • Unusual allocations
  • Society's values
  • Economic status
  • Illustrates
  • Highlights
  • Comparison
  • Analyze
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