The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie chart illustrates the pros and cons of visiting the bown
island
by the survey
from the experience visitors
.
Overall
,every place has disadvantages and advantages.most common of Bowen
island
are these eight are part of this
survey
weather,high cost of living, entertainment ,food quality,people
, culture,scenery and good quality accommodation.
the most common advantages of Bowen
island
are four which are part of the survey
to people
are nicest so 42% of visitors
are saying that people
are the advantage of visiting Bowen
island
although
scenery got close in the good books of tourist, in the end, scenery ended up second.tourist also
liked culture too and 12% of visitors
voted this
as an advantage at last
11% visitors
said that good accommodations are also
one of the pros of visiting the Bowen
island
.
The cons of going to Bowen
island
are many but one of the biggest from the survey
was the high cost of living there in addition
Second the pie chart depicts the tradeoff is entertainment 25% of visitors
voted that this
is a disadvantage, on the other hand
, people
consider the weather a negative point to 15% of people
voted for this
at last
food quality was not good 10% of Tourists voted for this
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