The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

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The pie chart illustrates the pros and cons of visiting the bown
island
by the
survey
from the experience
visitors
.
Overall
,every place has disadvantages and advantages.most common of
Bowen
island
are these eight are part of
this
survey
weather,high cost of living, entertainment ,food quality,
people
, culture,scenery and good quality accommodation. the most common advantages of
Bowen
island
are four which are part of the
survey
to
people
are nicest so 42% of
visitors
are saying that
people
are the advantage of visiting
Bowen
island
although
scenery got close in the good books of tourist, in the end, scenery ended up second.tourist
also
liked culture too and 12% of
visitors
voted
this
as an advantage at
last
11%
visitors
said that good accommodations are
also
one of the pros of visiting the
Bowen
island
. The cons of going to
Bowen
island
are many but one of the biggest from the
survey
was the high cost of living there
in addition
Second the pie chart depicts the tradeoff is entertainment 25% of
visitors
voted that
this
is a disadvantage,
on the other hand
,
people
consider the weather a negative point to 15% of
people
voted for
this
at
last
food quality was not good 10% of Tourists voted for
this
.
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