Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Truly there are a lot of challenges facing the world when it comes to Education, population and environment.The world has changed drastically and it affects us individually and collectively. In Nigeria, we have the second largest population in the world and no means to cater for the population, the masses are poor and unable to fend for themselves,

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country is

over populated

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and has

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and

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jobs daily. In the next ten years, there will

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too

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sufferings

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in the country as the educated and uneducated will be unable to get sufficient funds for survival

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occupation rate and

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of living will

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detrotiate

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. Our environment is populated and in ten years to come without adequate waste reduction it will be chaos, at the moment our gutters are clotted,

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management is very poor as well which has continuously led to health complications.

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system in Nigeria will be a crucial matter in ten years to come, employment of unqualified teachers,low paid salaries,

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in payment of the teaching

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which constantly leads to teaching and

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staff striking, all these factors contributes to the disruption in

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of education for the students.The schools are

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and lack basic amenities, the fees are on the high side and not a lot can afford

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which increases the proportion of the uneducated and

drop outs

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. These problems can be overcome if our government disburse more

funda

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funds

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to cater for the educational sector,

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payment of the environmental sanitation worker's

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so as to motivate them to do their work when due,

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sensitisation

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the masses on the importance of proper waste management so that health can

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be improved.

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Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
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Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Fully explain your ideas

The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on laand and in sea l.What are the reasons and solutions?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For all children,the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write.How far do you agree with this suggestion?How important it is for a child to learn to play a musical instrument in your view?