Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Truly there are a lot of challenges facing the world when it comes to Education, population and environment.The world has changed drastically and it affects us individually and collectively. In Nigeria, we have the second largest population in the world and no means to cater for the population, the masses are poor and unable to fend for themselves,
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jobs daily. In the next ten years, there will
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sufferings
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in the country as the educated and uneducated will be unable to get sufficient funds for survival
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occupation rate and
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of living will
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. Our environment is populated and in ten years to come without adequate waste reduction it will be chaos, at the moment our gutters are clotted,
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management is very poor as well which has continuously led to health complications.
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system in Nigeria will be a crucial matter in ten years to come, employment of unqualified teachers,low paid salaries,
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in payment of the teaching
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which constantly leads to teaching and
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staff striking, all these factors contributes to the disruption in
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of education for the students.The schools are
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and lack basic amenities, the fees are on the high side and not a lot can afford
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which increases the proportion of the uneducated and
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. These problems can be overcome if our government disburse more
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to cater for the educational sector,
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so as to motivate them to do their work when due,
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the masses on the importance of proper waste management so that health can
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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