Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old house style in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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change
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perspective
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way
the
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build their
houses
. Some
people
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there
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houses
coming from western
countries
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countries'
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house
design
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designs
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. But there are some who retain the
style
of
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houses
same
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as the
house
of
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neighbors
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, In
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essay
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i
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will give my opinion on why the local
authorities
should allow
people
to choose the
design
and
style
of
there
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their
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houses
. It
make
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sense to believe that
house
with the same
design
, with the same sizes and
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colors
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are very nice to say and it can boost tourism in our locality.
Moreover
old
house
style
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styles
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are very unique and very good architectural
design
.
For example
, there is a place in the Philippines, that place is Baguio City, there is one village there that the
design
and
style
of
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their
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houses
are the same, so many
tourist
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tourists
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there will go and take pictures, So
in my opinion
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, in my opinion,
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local
authorities
should consider
to retain
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retaining
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the old
style
houses
.
On the other hand
, some
people
want
there
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houses
, modern and different from others, because it can make them happy. If
the
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they
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have the money to make
there
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their
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houses
bigger and more modern, why not local
authorities
should support them
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For example
in America their
houses
there
is
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are
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very big and very modern
design
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designs
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because
ther
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the
local
authorities
support the need of
there
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people
to
built
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build
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big and different
style
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styles
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houses
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of houses
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. So local
authorities
should think twice about that idea. In my conclusion and honest opinion, I believe that building a
house
with different
style
and
design
can make the
house
owner who
plan
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to build the
house
very happy. And
also
its
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it is
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very good for the locality, And it should be supported
to
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the
people
in the
goverenment
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government
.
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  • Architectural conservation
  • Cultural integrity
  • Design guidelines
  • Eclectic architecture
  • Facade preservation
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  • Planning permission
  • Property valuation
  • Sustainable building
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