Some people think the newly built houses should be the same as the old house style in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the years,
people
change there
perspective Replace the word
their
the
way Change preposition
on the
the
build their Correct your spelling
they
houses
. Some people
pattern there
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their
houses
coming from western countries
Change noun form
countries'
country's
house
design
. But there are some who retain the Fix the agreement mistake
designs
style
of there
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their
houses
same
as the Correct article usage
the same
house
of there
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their
neighbors
, In Change the spelling
neighbours
these
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this
essay
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,essay
i
will give my opinion on why the local Change the capitalization
I
authorities
should allow people
to choose the design
and style
of there
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their
houses
.
It make
sense to believe that Change the verb form
makes
house
with the same design
, with the same sizes and Change the spelling
colours
colors
are very nice to say and it can boost tourism in our locality. Add the comma(s)
,colors
Moreover
old house
style
are very unique and very good architectural Fix the agreement mistake
styles
design
. For example
, there is a place in the Philippines, that place is Baguio City, there is one village there that the design
and style
of there
Correct your spelling
their
houses
are the same, so many tourist
there will go and take pictures, SoChange to a plural noun
tourists
in my opinion
local Add the comma(s)
, in my opinion,
authorities
should consider to retain
the old Change the verb form
retaining
style
houses
.
On the other hand
, some people
want there
Replace the word
their
houses
, modern and different from others, because it can make them happy. If the
have the money to make Correct your spelling
they
there
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their
houses
bigger and more modern, why not local authorities
should support them..
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.
...
For example
in America their houses
there is
very big and very modern Correct subject-verb agreement
are
design
because Fix the agreement mistake
designs
ther
local Correct your spelling
the
authorities
support the need of there
Correct your spelling
their
people
to built
big and different Wrong verb form
build
style
Fix the agreement mistake
styles
houses
. So local Change preposition
of houses
authorities
should think twice about that idea.
In my conclusion and honest opinion, I believe that building a house
with different style
and design
can make the house
owner who plan
to build the Change the verb form
plans
house
very happy. And also
its
very good for the locality, And it should be supported Replace the word
it's
it is
to
the Change preposition
by
people
in the goverenment
.Correct your spelling
government
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