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Human society has made great technological progress in the last 100 years. Some people think this also has negative effects on our life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#society #progress #years #people #effects #life
During the
last
 century the way we live changed a lot,
this
 is partially
due to
 all the new inventions and discoverings.
However
, it is
common
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 thought that not every progress made has actually
improven
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improved
improve
improves
 our
day to day
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life
,
moreover
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 some
devolpment
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development
 even made things worse. I am a firm supporter of change and I actually believe that going forward in time we as humans tend to make the world
a
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overall
 better place,
for example
,
elevating
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life
standars
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standards
 or finding new energy sources . For first I guess it is impossible not to see a bright side in how
life
 conditions saw a sudden improvement
throughtout
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throughout
 the
last
years
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, even countries that before were far beyond
on
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development somehow managed to get better
due to
 all the new possibilities given by technology. Specifically, Africa, thanks to an
overall
 evolution of medicine, was able to dramatically reduce its
deaths
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 rate and
consequencially
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consequentially
 elevate its
avarage
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average
life
expections
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expectations
.
Secondly
,
also
 the planet benefitted from the latest
scientical
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scientific
scientifical
 findings,
such
 as
renowable
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renewable
 energy, that made it possible to decrease pollution levels and make the planet greener.
Eventhought
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Even though
,
some
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 of
this
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these
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 new ways to produce energy resulted in
catastrofic
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catastrophic
 events, like what happened with nuclear power, it is possible to state that
benefits
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 are way above
downsides
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the downsides
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. In
conclusion
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 I think that mankind, learning
by
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 its errors, is able to evolve and thanks to the
colloboration
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collaboration
 of the brightest minds not only
to
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survive but
also
to
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find ways to fully
maximazime
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maximize
 the potential of what we have.
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