Frequency of eating at fast food restaurants among people in the USA (2003-2013)

The number of people who
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out at fast
food
restaurants in the USA between 2003 and 2013 years. They diverged
six
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groups , depending on how quickly eat in the fast
food
reastaurants
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restaurants
restaurant
. The
amount
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of residents who eat at fast
food
restaurant
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restaurants
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once a week and once or twice a month represented always high results . But , the amount population which every day or never go
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to eat junk
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saw
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per cent whole period.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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