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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school(s) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school(s) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
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The map illustrates the
town
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 situation of Canterbury. A new
school
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(s) will be built in the area and the map provides information
regading
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regarding
 two potential spots for the
school
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. In general, the
school
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 is planned to be established in
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town
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the town
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center
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centre
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, in the middle of
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city
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the city
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 and in the countryside, located in the west of the
city
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.
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 with, the
school
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 will be built in
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town
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the town
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 centre since there is no traffic jam there and it is located in the middle of the
city
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, near to housing. The possible site has a main road that connects the
town
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 centre with Chartham in the southeast with 4,500 people living there. To go there, people will need 7km away.
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, the chosen place will be front-in-front with the university
in
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 the north side. Second of all, the
school
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 is planned to be established in the west of the
city
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. The spot is located right in the countryside area in Sturry with a short journey,
5
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of 5
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km. The optional zone has a high population,
7,000
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of 7,000
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.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, school, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • contrast
  • location
  • accessibility
  • residential areas
  • facilities
  • traffic
  • transportation
  • environment
  • cost
  • feasibility
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