The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school(s) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.

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The map illustrates the

town

situation of Canterbury. A new

school

(s) will be built in the area and the map provides information

regading

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regarding

two potential spots for the

school

. In general, the

school

is planned to be established in

town

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the town

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center

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centre

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, in the middle of

city

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the city

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and in the countryside, located in the west of the

city

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with, the

school

will be built in

town

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the town

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centre since there is no traffic jam there and it is located in the middle of the

city

, near to housing. The possible site has a main road that connects the

town

centre with Chartham in the southeast with 4,500 people living there. To go there, people will need 7km away.

In addition

, the chosen place will be front-in-front with the university

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the north side. Second of all, the

school

is planned to be established in the west of the

city

. The spot is located right in the countryside area in Sturry with a short journey,

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of 5

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km. The optional zone has a high population,

7,000

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of 7,000

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3 paragraphs

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