Cities are now expanding; should the government make a better network for public transport or should they build more roads to facilitate car ownership? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapid development of cities, especially metropolitan ones, required the government to create changes and improvements. Lots of

people

are moving from one

place

to another and it leads to the need for better

transport

options. There are views on whether the government should improve the public

transport

system

or they should develop more roads for

car

users.

Although

both statements have their own benefit, I personally agree that modern cities now require a modern public

transportation

system

. For many years,

people

have been using

cars

as their daily

transportation

due to

their flexibility. Especially the busy ones, they could simply move from one city to another without having to wait or blend in with a huge mass of

people

. For some

people

with hundreds of activities, transporting by their own

car

could

also

save

their

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time, compared to public

transport

. Other than their flexibility, several

cars

also

provide more convenient space to its owner. Starting from its size of seats, room temperature, and

also

other features that are available on the

car

. Some

cars

now have

this

technology to be a "friend" to their owner, and others

also

have the ability to drive on their own, by using the automation mode.

However

, through its massive ownership, the number of

cars

used has created traffic everywhere. At

this

point, public

transportation

could be the solution to solve the problem. By creating

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, public

transport

could accommodate lots of

people

from

place

to

place

,

thus

reducing the number of traffic.

People

will no longer depend on their own

car

or other vehicles to

transport

themselves and

this

could only be achieved by making a better integrated public

transport

system

.

Furthermore

, the use of public

transportation

could

also

lead to less carbon emission. Personal

cars

and other vehicles used to contribute more carbon footprint compared to public

transport

.

This

condition would

also

support the global sustainable development goals and help the earth to be a better

place

to live. In conclusion, the use of

cars

may have benefits for

people

due to

their flexibility and comfort.

However

, because of the

problems

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it creates

such

as traffic and carbon emissions, the government should focus more on creating a better public

transportation

system

.