Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others prefer groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that the best way to provide education is debatable. It is a commonly held belief that individualized education might be better than

group

study. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will examine both views and I will show my opinion. There are people who argue that the benefits of teaching many people in the same lecture considerably outweigh is disadvantaged. The main reason for believing

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is that

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learning can help

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to compete with others.

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more motivated to participate and get

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may be more

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On the other hand

, others believe that personalized learning can be more effective than

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For example

, a prestigious journal article published that

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tend to get higher grades when they were taught alone. To illustrate,

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will not be distracted by the action of other

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. Indeed, it becomes apparent that individualized learning can be more helpful for the person. In conclusion, both arguments have their merits. On balance,

however

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learning is better than attending

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teaching.

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is because focusing more on

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student might help him to perform better,

as well as

individuals will not be

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