The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees.
The given map illustrates the present layout of the industrial area and how it will have changed in the future after being developed.
Over the period, both maps have maintained natural resources despite the extensive construction of commercial and medical facilities.
A closer look at the current map shows that on its eastern
side
, there are eight factories. After the redevelopment, these factories are replaced with new housing for employees. Some medical and commercial facilities will have been added to the southside after the plan
.
Regarding the changes in the middle of the plan
, the very first thing we see is that two roads will have been built around the square. Furthermore
, a school and a playground will be added to the western side
. At the top of the plan
in the middle of the river, new housing will be constructed on the northern side
of the plan
and also
new square will be added to the south side
.To sum up
, in this
development plan
, new housing and facilities and loads will be replaced by factories.Submitted by rasoolkhazaei995 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words side, plan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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