In some developed nations, it is seen that there is a growth in the average life expectancy. Despite the fact that more and more elderly people give society either individuals a host of disadvantages, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

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having more older

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society must carry more burden from

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. Pension must be financed more

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the elderly, and the

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has dealt to pay sufficient money for them.

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, there is a fact that the number of working

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is decreasing, undeniably, the

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receives

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money taxes from them to fund pensions.

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, they not only face the payment for the aged

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has a tension of

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shortage.

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, youth

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now are put under more pressure of overwork because of the lack of workers, they have a very hectic schedule to take care

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or to think about the significance of

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. By the way of illustration, the number of the aged in Japan is genuinely huge, whilst the birth

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is at an alarming

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, and lots of working

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spend most of their day working. It is a huge tension

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the Japanese

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problem

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some feasible solutions. In order to address the aforementioned issues, several actions can be taken by the

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a rise in average life expectancy is that the quality of life has improved so as people nowadays are healthier than in the past, the

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could consider increasing the retirement age. So as

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can be a remarkable way for the

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to cut the burden of the pension and to solve their tension about the need of growing the taxes

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is certainly true in the case of Japan, their

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solution, and it can be seen that a number of elderly must

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work

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to pay for their living.

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way to address the shortage problem is immigration. The

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should encourage abroad immigration, and some advantageous policies could be established for improving the

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of migration.

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, developed countries can simply appeal to the good source of working foreigners with their economic improvement, many companies could globally have personnel recruitment.

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have been welcomely attracting many

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encourage overseas student from many countries by giving a host of scholarship awards. In conclusion,

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elderly can lead to two mentioned problems which are the burden of pension and the lack of workers,

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issue can be dealt with by a joint effort of increasing in retired people and encouraging immigration from the other country.