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The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.
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The table presents the percentage of
students
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 getting admitted
in
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 four categories of secondary
schools
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 in three different years (2000, 2005 and 2009). As per the data, Voluntary-controlled
schools
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 outnumbered others in
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commulative
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cumulative
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 percentage of all years,
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 specialists were least attended. Community
Schools
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 gained popularity over the years as
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 continued to increase. On the alternative end,
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Students
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the Students
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 going to Voluntary-controlled
oragnization
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organisations
 kept decreasing. In the year 2000, Voluntary-controlled got more than half
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of pupils
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 engaged compared to the others with
percentage
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the percentage
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 of 52%. Specialists and Community had
same
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 amount of learners of 12%. Grammer
school
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schools
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 were involved with almost
quarter
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a quarter
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 of
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with
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24%. By the year 2000 onwards, voluntary
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 kept on sharply decreasing in 2005 and 2009 with
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the proportion
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proportion
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proportions
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 of 38% and 20% respectively.
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,
number
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a number
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 of
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 attending community
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were
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 sharply rising
with
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 32% in 2005 and 52% in 2009.
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, Specialist
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 remained steady over the period of time and
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grammar
schools
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 fell from 19% to 12% in 2009.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, schools with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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