The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

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Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Complete response

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Traditional ideas
Modern life
Younger generations
Stability
Guidance
Foundation
Cultural heritage
Rigid gender roles
Resistance to new technologies
Adaptability
Innovative solutions
Respecting elders
Maintaining family bonds
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