Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Globalization is increasing all of the time so there are many good reasons why young
people
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need to speak a second
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so that we can all communicate together and understand other
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.
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, there may
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be some problems with
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idea that we should consider them. First of all,
children
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could communicate with
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from other countries. More precisely, when they grow up, they can work in international companies. Through
language
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learning,
children
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could broaden their views and be more open to different cultures. To be specific, they can understand and collaborate with
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from other cultures easily.
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, the world will have greater prosperity and perhaps we can achieve global peace as well.
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, there is scientific evidence that learning a second
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is good for brain development.
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, in my school in China,
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are required to learn English, and most of them enjoy it and want to learn so
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is a positive activity.
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, it is not a good way to force
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to learn one
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, there are many different languages in the world and
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is the variety of human life. The best universal
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' in my region, Asia, may not be the best one in a different region of the world, so we need to be flexible. In conclusion, it is inevitable that English has become the 'universal
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Children
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get many benefits from learning a second
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at school, but maybe they should be able to choose which
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they learn, and
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might depend on what culture they come from.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • fluently
  • native language
  • effective communication
  • global understanding
  • unity
  • educational opportunities
  • career opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • social integration
  • language barriers
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