Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. What opinion do you agree and why?

There is no denying the fact that the main

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of females is debatable.

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it is a commonly held belief that a female should raise her

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and

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them

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manners.

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, some people argue that women must have their own rights and

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must take their opportunities in the job the same as men do. I strongly believe that women must look after their own offspring and help them to grow in a healthy environment. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view and show why I believe

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with, females must stay at home and monitor their

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education and behaviours in order to grow them up in a good environment. To illustrate,

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are born in

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and

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extensive care, the

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is the only person who is responsible

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and

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after them.

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, if she is busy with her work who is going to raise her

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?

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,

this

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makes it clear that a

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main

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in the world is raising

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and she must be free to address her

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role

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effectively.

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, mothers should be free to raise their

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and maintain their mental health stable.

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, a prestigious journal article published that 50% of youth who are grown by a busy working

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been affected by depression. Clearly,

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need to speak with their moms and complain to them about their

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feelings

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.

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, if the

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is stressed out with her work, she will be tired and will not listen to their issues. Indeed, it becomes apparent that a female must perform her own

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at home which is looking at her

children

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and raising them . In conclusion, in my opinion, I consider that a mom spending her time looking at her

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is better than working and leaving the responsibility of the

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and

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requires more attention from society.

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, the

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must address her kid's

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and monitor them regularly to make sure about their

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and health.