Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. What opinion do you agree and why?

There is no denying the fact that the main

role

of females is debatable.

While

it is a commonly held belief that a female should raise her

kids

and

teaches

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them

life

manners.

However

, some people argue that women must have their own rights and

she

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apply

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must take their opportunities in the job the same as men do. I strongly believe that women must look after their own offspring and help them to grow in a healthy environment. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain my point of view and show why I believe

this

.

To begin

with, females must stay at home and monitor their

child

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education and behaviours in order to grow them up in a good environment. To illustrate,

kids

are born in

this

life

and

request

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extensive care, the

mother

is the only person who is responsible

to raise

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and

look

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after them.

However

, if she is busy with her work who is going to raise her

children

?

Thus

,

this

makes it clear that a

women's

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woman's

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main

role

in the world is raising

kids

and she must be free to address her

life

role

effectively.

Moreover

, mothers should be free to raise their

kids

and maintain their mental health stable.

For instance

, a prestigious journal article published that 50% of youth who are grown by a busy working

mother

had

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been affected by depression. Clearly,

children

need to speak with their moms and complain to them about their

feeling

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feelings

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.

However

, if the

mother

is stressed out with her work, she will be tired and will not listen to their issues. Indeed, it becomes apparent that a female must perform her own

role

at home which is looking at her

children

and raising them . In conclusion, in my opinion, I consider that a mom spending her time looking at her

children

is better than working and leaving the responsibility of the

kids

and

hence

requires more attention from society.

Therefore

, the

mother

must address her kid's

life

and monitor them regularly to make sure about their

life

and health.