Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays an increasing number of

people

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are becoming concerned about their health and the quality of their diet. There are two diametrically opposed opinions on the matter. Some

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believe that each and every individual is responsible for their own health

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others state that it is the government that must ensure that the citizens have healthy eating habits. Personally, I believe that

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bear full responsibility for their

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for a number of reasons.

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nowadays there is a vast variety of products that everyone can choose from, ensuring a balanced diet consisting of different types of products with sufficient vitamins, proteins, carbohydrates and fats. Everyone can balance their

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these factors and

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based on their taste preferences.

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vegetarians will prefer beans rich in protein

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omnivorous eaters might opt for meat

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.

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,

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governments cannot considerably vary in their healthy eating programs usually adhering to

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size fits all' approach, individuals know exactly what they need in order to keep fit and healthy both generally speaking and in terms of

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approach as we know exactly what we need to succeed in life,

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strong and healthy.

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, others argue that the government is fully responsible for the kind of

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its population consume because they make decisions regarding the quality of

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their country produce and import

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prices.

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, in many developing

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rarely have access to

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,

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being forced to choose something cheap like fast

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.

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, the government can introduce legislation as regards

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what kind of

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can be promoted, seen

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in many European countries where the advertising of fast

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, alcohol and cigarettes is prohibited.

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, it is argued, can affect the way we eat and control the

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of the whole population. In conclusion,

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the

governments

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may play a role in the choice of

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of its citizens, it is still the responsibility of every individual whether to eat

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diet or not

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many reasons being that a variety of methods to balance their

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or their finances. After all our life is in our hands!