The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in you answer.

There is no doubt , men are working hard to demonstrate novel things. It has been a lot of discoveries,in the few centuries like computer technologies. Finders are curious to figure out the clues about the past and for future. I expect many changes in the 21st century.
In addition
, scientists are paving the way to make advanced robots which will be beneficial for everyone. As per discussion, robots might be in school in lieu of teachers
along with
classrooms will be digitally
as well as
virtually.
Moreover
, I wish that there will be flying cars in the air so that commuters can travel anywhere without traffic congestion. Even, it will reduce pollution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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