Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The environmental

problem

indeed needs the utmost attention. Some think that increasing

fuel

prices for

transportation

can be the most efficient solution to tackling the environmental

problem

. I strongly disagree with that notion, I believe that there is another option that can be more effective than to rise the cost of

fuel

.

This

essay will elaborate on my standpoint thoroughly with the following evidence. To commence with, it is unarguable that the emission of

vehicles

brings myriad

pollution

, especially to the air quality.

Hence

, some

people

think the idea of increasing the cost of

fuel

will deliberately persuade

people

to consider leaving the use of private

vehicles

for public

transportation

.

However

, that notion proved ineffective to tackle environmental problems. Take Indonesia for an instance, the government has implemented the idea of raising

fuel

prices which depicted the results that

people

still insist on using private

transportation

rather than

public

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vehicle.

Thus

, there is no reduction in the number of active

transportation

,

in other words

, there is no

pollution

depletion occurred.

In addition

, there is another solution

that is

possibly effective to solve the environmental

problem

which is improving the quality of public

vehicles

.

Instead

of increasing

fuel

prices, the government should pay attention to developing public

transportation

which is the main reason why the public is most likely avoid to using it. Take Singapore as an example, the massive development and advancement in public

transportation

such

as MRT and LRT is an inevitable success in persuading every resident to utilize that public

transportation

rather than a private car.

As a result

, the quality of air in Singapore is improved compared to Indonesia which still lacks

of

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public

transportation

. In conclusion, it is valid that the numerous active

transportation

, especially private

vehicles

is being the cause of the environmental

problem

that emerged.

Thus

, the government will deliberately concern about how to decrease the number of

vehicles

.

Although

increasing the

fuel

rate is believed can be effective to solve environmental

pollution

, focusing more on developing sophisticated

vehicles

is profoundly effective to attract

people

to switch their

transportation

modes.

In other words

, it can reduce a lot of private car use which can help to solve environmental

pollution

.