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The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever. Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.

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The use of the
internet
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 is inevitably very popular in
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 era especially, to
access
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 communication and
information
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. Some believe that the activity of using the
internet
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 should be controlled,
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 others argue that the liberation of using the
internet
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 should be a human right.
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 of the form. To commence with, some
people
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 consider the idea of limiting the use of the
internet
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 since it is too easy to
access
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 without any limitation of time or place and irrespective of age.
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, if immature users
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 as children or teenagers
access
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 it freely, they will be contaminated with inappropriate content. Watching Youtube,
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, there a lot of children who can watch the content in its apps without any parental supervision; It sometimes consists of inappropriate ads,
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, ads about cigarettes or alcohol which is unconscious can influence children to smoke or drink alcohol.
On the other hand
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, others believe that
people
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 should be free to
access
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 the
internet
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 without any restrictions. It is because some
people
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 are very dependent on it which is related to their work or academic needs. The learning process in a covid era is an instance. since the covid 19 hits the world, every activity
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 as school is being switched to an online method.
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, pupils need to have unlimited
access
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 to some platforms
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 as Zoom for communication tools, and Google or Wikipedia for the source of their
information
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.
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,
this
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 freedom is consciously following the lead of the teacher, which means there are still boundaries for pupils in accessing the
Internet
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. In conclusion, it can be said that the
internet
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 truly benefits
people
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 in communication, and it is the ocean of
information
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.
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, some interference should be applied especially, for underage kids since they are still unable to filter some improper
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 thereby, every user can be secured to
access
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 or watch every content
that is
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 suitable for their age.
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