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After graduation, many students take a year to travel. Some think that it would be more useful to work for a year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The bar diagram shows information about seven different professions done by two genders in the UK in the year 2007.
Overall
, a great number of women preferred teaching as a job
while
 a majority of men worked in construction.
Also
, both genders showed equal interest in journalism. Regarding females, teaching and therapy were done by a majority with approximately 90 and just above 81 respectively.
Moreover
, compared to males, the figure of women lawyers and scientists was slightly lower than that of males in the same professions. Coming to males, the highest percentage of them were employed in the construction sector which exceeded the number of women working in the same field more than 8 times. A minor number of men worked as therapists (about 19) and teachers ( 10) when compared to that ladies who stood at 81 and 90 in the same jobs.
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