You have been a living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:  Explain the situation  Describe why it bothers you  Suggest a solution

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Dear Mtr. Brown I am writing to inform you problem caused by a new neighbour who just moved a month ago. As you know that I am living in

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house no. 204

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a new neighbour shifted into

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house no. 205 which is close to me except for any other neighbours. He usually arranges the party every weekend even though he did not miss one weekend so far. The problems created by his event are not only that he kept the

music

out loud until midnight, but lots of cars parked on the road which cause heavy traffic.

Due to

this

, we are unable to sleep that night by heavy

music

and traffic noises.

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, our children are not able to concentrate on study. I would like you to give him gentle advice to keep the

music

at a low level, especially for the internal area only and stop the

music

and party maximum by 10.00 PM. I hope you will consider my problem

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a priority and take immediate action. Best Regards, Mandeep Singh

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1Word repetition
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3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

176 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have been a living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:  Explain the situation  Describe why it bothers you  Suggest a solution

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