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You have been a living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:  Explain the situation  Describe why it bothers you  Suggest a solution

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Dear Mtr. Brown I am writing to inform you problem caused by a new neighbour who just moved a month ago. As you know that I am living in
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house no. 204
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house no. 205 which is close to me except for any other neighbours. He usually arranges the party every weekend even though he did not miss one weekend so far. The problems created by his event are not only that he kept the
music
 out loud until midnight, but lots of cars parked on the road which cause heavy traffic.
Due to
this
, we are unable to sleep that night by heavy
music
 and traffic noises.
Moreover
, our children are not able to concentrate on study. I would like you to give him gentle advice to keep the
music
 at a low level, especially for the internal area only and stop the
music
 and party maximum by 10.00 PM. I hope you will consider my problem
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a priority and take immediate action. Best Regards, Mandeep Singh
Submitted by mandeepsinghsony2022 on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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