Some people think hard work and determination bring sucess. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
For being a successful person, there are many definitions you may hear of. Smart
people
think that hard work
and determination
are important, while
others say wealth and good looking bring success
. This
essay will discuss how one
can succeed by being a persistent worker and goal-oriented, and the same with money
and a better appearance.
On the one
hand, most successful people
advised the world how constant work
or striving towards a goal and a focused mind helped them to achieve their objectives. They add that trying again and again and learning from past mistakes help anyone to achieve success
. Each time you fail, you learn something, which means you achieve something that leads you towards your success
. Former President of America, Abraham Lincon, is an example of this
phenomenon. He failed many times, but always come back and stood up with more confidence and determination
. Therefore
, I believe that everything is possible to achieve for you if persistent work
and determination
are your main traits.
However
, Some short-sighted people
say that wealth and handsomeness are more important to become successful. They add that money
helps them to buy expensive resources that further
aid them to achieve a goal. Plus, a good appearance helps anyone to enter into the business and sales industry. For example
, it is seen that sales persons, and celebrities such
as sportsmen, actors, tycoons etc., are good-looking and attract other people
to watch them. One
can become a brand ambassador because of good looking only. But, I opine that money
cannot buy one
's success
, and an attractive look may help you to enter the businesses wherein your good appearance is important.
In conclusion, although
money
and a charming look can help you to buy resources and become a famous personality, I think that hard work
and determination
are more important factors to be considered to accomplish objectives.Submitted by gauravkalathiya123 on
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