The two maps show a park in 2010 and in present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided two maps reveal that the public place called Grange was renovated between 1920 and the present day. Looking for an

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perspective, from 1920 to the present the garden was totally changed and added more entertainment features,

water

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features, and relaxation features

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eliminating and renovating some characteristics.

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with, the stage for musicians, in the west of the

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garden has been converted and modernized into an Amphitheatre for concerts and the seating facilities which were positioned around the stage for musicians have been removed. And

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the pond for

water

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plants in the northeast of the place has been flattened and a play area for children has been constructed

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the rose backyard to the west of the pond was removed and a cafe has been placed.

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, the fountain in the middle of the park was knocked-down and a big Rose field has been relocated

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seating facilities have been positioned around the Rose garden. The glass house was demolished and a

water

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feature has been added to the east of the south entrance. The two entrances and some Rose gardens still remained and a new underground car park entrance has been relocated to the east of the

water

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feature.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

205 words

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