When designing building, the intended use of the building should be taken in into account as important rather than the outward appearance? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The celebrities

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are surrounded by the world of beauty and wealth, and the same is

reflect

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over

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their social media accounts.

This

artificial reflection over the

achievements

have

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a negative impact on the

youth

.

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essay is in agreement that the materialistic glorification of celebrities

have

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a bad impact on

youth

.

Firstly

, it is very much human to get attracted by the charm associated with

the

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celebrity status.

Secondly

,

the

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social media plays a vital role

of

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spreading

such

news which tends to attract

masses

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. The impact is quite evident across the young generation getting easily inclined towards

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beauty and monetary stature. Most of them easily

neglects

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the hardships,

hustle

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the celebrity

have

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gone through in the past, rather they try to achieve the status by adopting unethical ways.

This

disturbs the elementary approach towards leading

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life.

On the other hand

, the

youth

should be responsible enough to understand the difference between temporary

achievements

and actual

achievements

and choose their Idols

accordingly

. They should look up to the real

heros

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heroes

who have done great things for the nation in past and have paved a path to real success for the future generation. The young generation should seek inspiration from

such

role models and should stay motivated to do good

to

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society. In conclusion, the

youth

should be smart enough to choose their role models on the basis of

achievements

rather than the assets and popularity they have. They should focus on the struggles the person

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gone through to achieve

this

level.